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 Smoke, Singing, And Country Sky

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PostSubject: Smoke, Singing, And Country Sky   Smoke, Singing, And Country Sky Icon_minitimeSat May 09, 2009 5:56 am

Part 1 of the poem....two parter? I like this one. I had to do it for an LA project. After eading this, read End Of Holding On.

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The stars are twinkling tonight
So many stars
illuminate the
country sky
You follow my gaze
with a slow smile on your face

I close my eyes
and curl around the moment.

The swirl of smoke rising from the end
of a cigarette
disappears into this
country sky
Soft humming escapes your lips
The porch light glows dim

I close my eyes
and curl around the moment.

Hands tap out a beat on the table
Hums turn into warbled singing
and flows out into the
country sky
Long fingers grasp
and wrap themselves around my hand

I close my eyes
and curl around the moment.

The air is fresh but cold
The night is still yet loud
People look up into the
country sky
Restless but still
content

I close my eyes
and curl around the moment.

Smoke, singing and country sky


A small tap on the table
the cigarette’s out
An inhale of the
country sky
The stub falls to the ground
An exhale of smoke; choking

I close my eyes
and curl around the moment.

Soft laughs and faint conversation
Faint conversation
that fades into the
country sky
Fingers that hold on tighter
Squeeze with no signs of letting go

I close my eyes
and curl around the moment.

The voices get louder
Loudness that couldn’t be absorbed by
the still, beautiful, black
country sky
You smile and smile and
grin and grin.

I close my eyes
and curl around the moment.

As we go further into the night
I don’t want to sleep
But stare all night long at the
country sky
Everything’s suddenly so quiet
quite and still

I close my eyes
and…
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